Well, seems like all the critics have left the building. So, I guess I'll take a stab at it. Now I also saw the Trower tour so I'm familiar with the show.
Wild Bill, I liked your review. Your style is concise and simple. It's from the heart and you tell it as you felt it. Some things other people like to see in a review might also include production values, like the light show (if there was one or commenting that there wasn't any appreciable lighting), sound quality and dynamics. It's nice to get a full 'picture' of the show, both visually and aurally. This can also include the audience's general reactions and 'tude.
But as I said, I like your general style. Good simple (and that's a positive thing) authentic style.
Now, I do have one bone to pick. Glenn Letsch plays the 'bass' guitar, not a base.

One of those cases where spell check won't catch it.
Thanks for the review. I especially liked the psychedelic section about midway through where they went to an almost black light setting and played into the alternate universe. Cool stuff.